Essay revision I

ON ONE SHEET OF PAPER: Blank outline from my website ON ANOTHER SHEET OF PAPER: Your outline (be sure that this is stapled to the blank outline) ON ANOTHER SHEET OF PAPER: Your revised paper ON ANOTHER PAPER: Answers to the following questions ON ANOTHER PAPER: Complete the graphic organizer using your thesis statement…explain the need for a claim 1. Count the number of transitions you used. Write down each of the transitions you used, where in the essay you used it and its meaning. 2. What definition strategies did you use? Where in the essay did you use them? Define the definition strategy you used. 3. Did you complete the graphic organizer for writing effective thesis statements? Is it stapled to your essay? Is your thesis statement parallel? In your conclusion, did you restate the thesis statement from your intro? 4. Did you use MLA style? You can select MLA style when you are creating your document. 5. Did you restate the prompt in the first sentence of each body paragraph? 6. Does each body paragraph have at least two quotes to support the topic sentence? 7. Did you submit the outline (which can be found on my website)? 8. Do the quotes that you chose for your body paragraphs support each topic sentence?