Wednesday, August 31, 2016
Spring Board for Sept. 1
1. Warmup
2. Review scenarios from yesterday
3. Complete 1.9 including questions on Socratic seminar. Use info from each text to support answer. Bring answers to me so I can check for completion. Highlight the references you've made to the different texts
1.10
4. Highlight learning targets
5. Complete before reading activity
6. Complete during-reading activity
7. Complete after-reading activity. You will also need to write a seven-sentence summary (one sentence for each paragraph)
8. Complete questions at bottom of Page 49
Spring Board for August 31
1. Warmup (ACT)
2. self evaluate WE
3. create Amendment scenarios using the example I shared in class
4. Finish 1.9 in Spring Board
Socratic seminar rubric
www.fairfaxhs.org/ourpages/auto/2013/12/9/50146344/socratic-seminar-rubric.doc
Warmup 8/31
1. A. NO CHANGE
B. it's
C. its'
D. OMIT the underlined portion
2. F. NO CHANGE
G. yours
H. you
J. you're
3. A. NO CHANGE
B. with they're
C. in their
D. with there
4. F. NO CHANGE
G. who's too
H. whose to
J. whose too
5. A. NO CHANGE
B. her
C. she's
D. hers
Tuesday, August 30, 2016
Warmup 8/30
11. A. NO CHANGE
B. oxen's virtues
C. oxens' virtues
D. oxens' virtues'
12. A. NO CHANGE
B. who's meals
C. whose meal's
D. whose meals
13. A. NO CHANGE
B. Child who's
C. Child, whose
D. Child whose
14. A. NO CHANGE
B. Its' not
C. It isn't
D. There isn't
15. A. NO CHANGE
B. they're feelings'.
C. their feeling's.
D. their feelings.
Monday, August 29, 2016
Spring Board for Tuesday, August 30
Unpack learning targets …
rhetorical features
argumentative text
common theme
Watch the following clips
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JFAs01HvMJI
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2yTto1UuZbw
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oMsazPhRR9s
Complete “Before Reading” activity on Page 43
Read story while following along with FDR speech from youtube
Complete the “During Reading” activity on Page 43
Complete both of the “Key Ideas and Details” on Page 44
Complete both of the “Key Ideas and Details” on Page 46
Complete the “After Reading” activity on Page 45
Socratic seminar on Page 47 (as a class)
Expository essay template
Sorry for not posting this sooner.
Intro
1. As a group, work together to draft the introduction, or opening paragraph, of the response.
1. Hook: draw in reader
2. Prompt: restate prompt
3. Thesis/Claim – It is your position or opinion in the form of an OBJECTIVE (no I think) claim that addresses the problem and solution
4. Explanation of Claim/lead-in –
First body paragraph
(5) Topic Sentence
(6) Evidence/Quote 1 – The article reads, “______________________” (citation)
(7) Warrant/explanation – quote in own words and why is quote relevant/how does it support claim?
This could be 2/3 sentences
(8) Evidence/Quote 2 – “_______________________,” stated source _________ (citation).
(9) Warrant/explanation – quote in own words and why is quote relevant/how does it support claim?
This could be 2/3 sentences
(10) Evidence/Quote 3 – Source ____ states, “__________________________________”(citation)
(11) Warrant/explanation – quote in own words and why is quote relevant/how does it support claim?
This could be 2/3 sentences
(12) Refer back to topic Sentence and claim/Transition to next paragraph
Second body paragraph
(13) Topic Sentence
(14) Evidence/Quote 1 – The article reads, “______________________” (citation)
(15) Warrant/explanation – quote in own words and why is quote relevant/how does it support claim?
This could be 2/3 sentences
(16) Evidence/Quote 2 – “_______________________,” stated source _________ (citation).
(17) Warrant/explanation – quote in own words and why is quote relevant/how does it support claim?
This could be 2/3 sentences
(18) Evidence/Quote 3 – Source ____ states, “__________________________________”(citation)
(19) Warrant/explanation – quote in own words and why is quote relevant/how does it support claim?
This could be 2/3 sentences
(20) Refer back to topic Sentence and claim/Transition to next paragraph
Third body paragraph
(21) Topic Sentence
(22) Evidence/Quote 1 – The article reads, “______________________” (citation)
(23) Warrant/explanation – quote in own words and why is quote relevant/how does it support claim?
This could be 2/3 sentences
(24) Evidence/Quote 2 – “_______________________,” stated source _________ (citation).
(25) Warrant/explanation – quote in own words and why is quote relevant/how does it support claim?
This could be 2/3 sentences
(26) Evidence/Quote 3 – Source ____ states, “__________________________________”(citation)
(27) Warrant/explanation – quote in own words and why is quote relevant/how does it support claim?
This could be 2/3 sentences
(28) Refer back to topic Sentence and claim/Transition to next paragraph
Conclusion
(29) Summarize Paper
(30) Restate Thesis/Claim
(31) Offer Final Thoughts
Warmup 8/29
1. A. NO CHANGE
B. its
C. it's
D. its'
2. A. NO CHANGE
B. Africans' artisans
C. African artisans
D. African artisan's
3. A. NO CHANGE
B. It's actually losing it's
C. It's actually losing its
D. Its actually losing it's
4. A. NO CHANGE
B. Incas had?
C. Inca's had!
D. Incas had!
5. A. NO CHANGE
B. Ones
C. Ones'
D. A persons
Thursday, August 25, 2016
Warmup for 8/26
1. A. NO CHANGE
B. pitcher's arm's
C. pitchers' arms'
D. pitchers' arms
2. A. NO CHANGE
B. their atmosphere, their
C. it's atmosphere, it's
D. its atmosphere, its
3. A. NO CHANGE
B. another's ideas
C. another's idea's
D. anothers' ideas'
4. A. NO CHANGE
B. humanity
C. humanities'
D. humanities
5. A. NO CHANGE
B. its
C. it's
D. its'
Warmup for 8/25
12. A. NO CHANGE
B. whose
C. which
D. whom
13. A. NO CHANGE
B. which
C. who
D. whom
14. A. NO CHANGE
B. that's
C. whose
D. who's
15. A. NO CHANGE
B. what
C. who
D. which
16. A. NO CHANGE
B. whoever
C. which
D. whichever
Wednesday, August 24, 2016
Assignments in Spring Board 1.6-
1. While reading “What is an American?” define confusing words in the white space on Page 27.
2. Complete both “Key Ideas and Details” on Page 29.
3. Complete “Definition by Classification” and “Definition by Function” on Page 30. These answers go in the box on Page 30.
4. Complete “Check your Understanding” on Page 31. Summary should go in “My Notes’ on Page 31 and should include at least one quotation from the letter.
5. Complete during-reading activity on Page 32 WITH 7-sentence summary
6. Complete key ideas/details on Page 33
7. Complete key ideas/details on Page 34
8. Complete key ideas/details on Page 35
9. Complete after-reading activity on Page 35
10. Complete “Check your Understanding” on Page 36
FOR FRIDAY, AUGUST 26
11. Highlight places in the story on Page 37 where Hughes uses imagery to evoke American history.
12. Complete "Key Ideas and Details" on Page 37. Answer goes in "My Notes" on Page 37.
13. Find an iconic American image on the Internet. Use the information in 1.8 for ideas. In crayons or markers draw a picture of the image on a piece of copy paper. On the back of the image tell me:
1. what does the image depict? Include the year the picture was taken and what's going on in the picture
2. Why is it an iconic image?
For more information on iconic images, go here:
https://harpersvalley.wordpress.com/2012/12/12/what-makes-an-image-iconic/
OR HERE
http://www.theatlantic.com/entertainment/archive/2011/11/what-makes-an-iconic-image-from-the-mona-lisa-to-che-guevara/248269/
14. Complete key ideas/details on Page 38
15. Complete key ideas/details on Page 39
16. Complete "After Reading" on Page 40
17. Complete "Researching an Iconic Image" on Page 40
1.9
18. Highlight learning targets in 1.9
19. Complete “Before Reading” activity on Page 43
20. Complete the “During Reading” activity on Page 43
21. Complete both of the “Key Ideas and Details” on Page 44
22. Complete both of the “Key Ideas and Details” on Page 46
23. Complete the “After Reading” activity on Page 45
1.10
24. Highlight learning targets
25. Complete before reading activity
26. Complete during-reading activity
27. Complete after-reading activity. You will also need to write a seven-sentence summary (one sentence for each paragraph)
28. Complete questions at bottom of Page 49
Class Essay, Period 4
Using the rubric on Page 52, this essay received a 2.5 (Ideas), 2.5 (Structure) and 2.5 (Use of Language).
Warmup 8/24
6. A. NO CHANGE
B. Whichever
C. Whoever
D. Whomever
7. A. NO CHANGE
B. whom
C. what
D. who
8. A. NO CHANGE
B. which
C. who
D. whom
9. A. NO CHANGE
B. whomever
C. who
D. whom
10. A. NO CHANGE
B. whom
C. which
D. whose
Tuesday, August 23, 2016
Warmup 8/23
1. A. NO CHANGE
B. which
C. who
D. whom
2. A. NO CHANGE
B. who's
C. whom
D. whose
3. A. NO CHANGE
B. Whom
C. Who
D. Whose
4. A. NO CHANGE
B. What
C. Whatsoever
D. Whom
5. A. NO CHANGE
B. whom
C. whoever
D. whomever
Monday, August 22, 2016
Warmup 8/22
1. A. NO CHANGE
B. I drove
C. me had driven
D. I had drove
2. A. NO CHANGE
B. It was
C. There was
D. We have
3. A. NO CHANGE
B. our
C. ourselves
D. us
4. A. NO CHANGE
B. it had been
C. theirs had been
D. they were
Thursday, August 18, 2016
Spring Board for Thursday, August 18
1. Take a sheet of copy paper and with a partner complete “Before Reading” on Page 27. Your group will turn in one paper
2. While reading “What is an American?” with your partner define confusing words in the white space on Page 27. You both need to answer this in your book
3. Complete both “Key Ideas and Details” on Page 29. You both need to answer this in your book
4. Once you have finished reading the story complete the “After Reading” activity on Page 29 with your partner. Your group will turn in one paper
5. With your partner complete “Definition by Classification” and “Definition by Function” on Page 30. These answers go in the box on Page 30. You both need to answer this in your book
6. Complete “Check your Understanding” on Page 31. Summary should go in “My Notes’ on Page 31 and should include at least one quotation from the letter. You both need to answer this in your book
Wednesday, August 17, 2016
Warmup 8/18
1. A. No change
B. they're,
C. its
D. it's
2. A No change
B. its
C. our
D. their
3. A. No change
B. their
C. they're
D. his
4. A. No change
B. yours
C. we
D. us
5. A. No change.
B. his
C. there
D. our
Tuesday, August 16, 2016
Warmup, August 17
1. A. NO CHANGE
B. began
C. first shows itself to the masses
D. appears for the first time
2. A. NO CHANGE
B. for entertaining themselves
C. to entertain themself
D. to be entertainers so that they could amuse the tribe
3. A. NO CHANGE
B. can be attribute
C. is attributed
D. is attribute
4. A. NO CHANGE
B. By the Greeks, were written thousands of plays
C. Plays were written by the Greeks
D. The Greeks wrote thousands of plays
5. A. NO CHANGE
B. still spark controversy
C. sparks controversy always
D. still sparking controversy
1. A. NO CHANGE
B. began
C. first shows itself to the masses
D. appears for the first time
2. A. NO CHANGE
B. for entertaining themselves
C. to entertain themself
D. to be entertainers so that they could amuse the tribe
3. A. NO CHANGE
B. can be attribute
C. is attributed
D. is attribute
4. A. NO CHANGE
B. By the Greeks, were written thousands of plays
C. Plays were written by the Greeks
D. The Greeks wrote thousands of plays
5. A. NO CHANGE
B. still spark controversy
C. sparks controversy always
D. still sparking controversy
Expository essay checklist
Can you answer "Yes" to all of these questions? If not, then you will need to revise your essay
1. My writing starts with a HOOK
2. The thesis statement is at the beginning of the essay (Introduction Paragraph).
3. There are at least 5 paragraphs – an introduction, 3 body paragraphs with different details supporting your thesis, and a conclusion.
4. At least 2 facts are provided to support the thesis statement
5. Each fact has 2 or 3 supporting details.
6. Each paragraph begins with a different transition word.
7. Writing contains vivid verbs.
8. Writing avoids repeating the same words over & over.
9. Writing is edited for:
Capitalization
Punctuation
Spelling
10. Writing has a conclusion that restates the thesis in a different way
Monday, August 15, 2016
57. A. NO CHANGE
B. and
C. yet
D. because
58. At this point, the author is considering adding the following sentence:
These events have been explored in the film "Sid and Nancy."
Should the author make this addition?
F. No, because the passage does not specify whether the film was well-received
G. No, because the information is irrelevant to the focus of the essay
H. Yes, because the addition helps explain the fascination with the Chelsea Hotel
J. Yes, because the addition validates the importance of the Chelsea Hotel
59. A. NO CHANGE
B. cultivated
C. has cultivated
D. cultivates
60. F. NO CHANGE
G. should
H. perhaps will
J. will
Thursday, August 11, 2016
46.
A. No change
B. reporter, who is
C. reporters whom are
D. OMIT the underlined portion
47.
A. NO CHANGE
B. plumb
C. plum
D. plummet
48.
A. NO CHANGE
B. building, which was
C. building that
D. building, which
49.
A. NO CHANGE
B. will serve
C. serving
D. served
50.
A. NO CHANGE
B. lie
C. lain
D. have laid
Sunday, August 7, 2016
Until you have experienced raccoons mating underneath your bedroom at three in the morning, you have missed one of life’s more sensational moments. It is an uncommon event, to say the least. If you’ve ever heard cats fighting in the night, you have a clue. Magnify the volume and the intensity by ten. It’s not what you’d call a sensual and erotic sound. More like a three-alarm fire is what it is.
I remember the first time it happened. Since conditions were not really conducive to sleep, I got up. When I say I got up, I mean I GOT UP. About three feet up. Straight up. Covers and all.
When I had recovered my aplomb and adjusted to the new adrenaline level, I got a flashlight and went outside and peered up under the house. This lady raccoon and her suitor were squared off in a corner, fangs bared, covered with mud and blood, and not looking very sexy at all.
Neither my presence nor the beam of light could override what drove them on. With snarls and barks and screams, the passionate encounter raged on. While I watched, the matter was finally consummated and resolved. They had no shame. What had to be done was done. And they wandered off, in a kind of glazy-eyed stupor, to groom themselves for whatever comes next in the life of a raccoon.
I sat there in the rain, my light still shining into the trysting chamber. And I pondered. Why is it that love and life so often have to be carried forth with so much pain and strain and mess? I ask you, why is that?
I was thinking of my own sweet wife asleep in the bed right above me, and our own noises of conflict mixed with affection. I wondered what the raccoons must conclude fron the sounds a husband and wife make at night – the ones that sound like “If you really loved me you would not keep making such a mess in the bathroom,” followed by “OH YEAH? WELL, LET ME TELL YOU A FEW THINGS…”
Why isn’t love easy?
I don’t know. And the raccoons didn’t say.
What is the author’s tone?
A) Adventurous
B) Majestic
C) Giddy
D) Introspective
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